I’ve now fiddled with the colours and rounded the edges of the trees so they didn’t appear so cut off at the edge and added some words to the picture which focuses attention on the two figures in the background rather than the central figure with the brolly. I think this colour palette works better and makes it a more striking image. The choice of font was deliberate: I wanted it to look like a sentence in a story and have an old fashioned ‘typed’ look seems to work.

I’ve now fiddled with the colours and rounded the edges of the trees so they didn’t appear so cut off at the edge and added some words to the picture which focuses attention on the two figures in the background rather than the central figure with the brolly. I think this colour palette works better and makes it a more striking image. The choice of font was deliberate: I wanted it to look like a sentence in a story and have an old fashioned ‘typed’ look seems to work.